File 005 · Craft

Reading the Gutter

The blank strip between panels is where the reader becomes the accomplice.

Nothing is not nothing

A comic shows selected moments. Between them, the reader supplies motion, consequence, elapsed time and sometimes the most violent event in the story. Scott McCloud popularized the term “closure” for this participation: we observe parts and perceive a whole.

The idea is older than any terminology. Cartoonists have always cut from raised fist to fallen body, from closed door to morning light, from rocket launch to alien shore. The gap is an editing decision printed on paper.

Omission creates ownership

If the artist draws every increment of an action, the reader witnesses. If the artist removes the decisive instant, the reader constructs it. That imagined version can be more personal and more durable than a single supplied image.

This is the truth inside the proprietor's line: kill someone between panels and the character dies differently in every reader's mind. Not because the gutter is mystical, but because the form recruits memory and imagination to complete it.

Time is elastic

A gutter can contain a fraction of a second or a century. The size of the white space alone does not determine the duration. Image, caption, repeated setting and the amount of change do. A hand reaching for a glass followed by the glass lifted gives one kind of interval. A city followed by ruins gives another.

Good pacing is not simply more panels for slow and fewer for fast. It is the deliberate relationship between the moments you choose and those you withhold.

A practical cutting test

Thumbnail the sequence. For each transition, say aloud what the reader must invent. If the answer is “nothing,” one panel may be redundant. If the answer requires information the reader cannot reasonably infer, the cut is broken. The sweet spot is an active leap with a fair landing.

What to look for

  • The exact action omitted between two images.
  • Whether the next panel confirms, surprises or contradicts your inference.
  • How captions change the amount of time inside the gap.
  • Whether the most important event is shown or entrusted to the reader.

Further shelf

Library of Congress: Raina Telgemeier and Scott McCloud program

Strip Panel Naked: formal analysis of comics storytelling

Billy Ireland Cartoon Library: digital exhibits

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